YELLOW WALLPAPER
Paper instructions:
THIS IS WHAT THE EDITOR’S COMMENTS WERE.

As I look at your essay, I have noted that your intro paragraph needs a bit of modification. After you speak generally about the institution of marriage, you begin then to move into the short stories and the plight of the women therein. What you need immediately after this type of introduction is a transitional sentence saying something like. . . This gender inequality is even documented in famous literature. Examples of these are The Yellow Wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins-Gilman and Story of an Hour by Kate Chopin. This should be the last sentence in your intro paragraph. Then, move into specifics about the short stories.

And your In text citations, there is no need to put a comma between the author and the page number. All in all, I think you have been quite a good job here. Just do the modifications I have suggested, and you should be fine.