Paper instructions:

Don”t stray to far from the structure of the paper. follow the instructions left by the professor and try to add mostly to what is there, with subtracting only a little. Must be 10 complete pages, needs 3 book sources and at least 3 primary sources. Paragraphs need to be shortened to 6-8 sentences. Attempt to keep the writing style as similar as possible. Both attachments are different, one is of the professors comments and the other is the original.