PID. Lacks Clarity

Paper details:
CUSTOMIZE CONTENT: 1) Not a typical structure for a PID. Lacks Clarity.
2) Gantt chart is given but no detailed costing. No discussion on critical path and slack. No discussion on measure, monitor and control. No discussion on legal and contractual issues.
3) Some risks are identified in the risk management section but no risk responses or mitigation measures planned.
4) A few critical success factors were identified but in general, the section lacks clarity.
5) No discussion and comparisons on carious project approaches.

In general a management report that lack clarity. Many areas requested by the assignment are not covered at all or not covered in a manner that is clear and detailed. In addition, the format of the management report is not quite right (e.g. no introduction and no conclusion)

hi writer i have failed this paper and i have to redo this assignment. Kindly help me to covered all the detail which i have mention above. please help me covered in a manner that is clear and detailed.
i will upload a files please look thorught it and mention every points thanks **
OTHER: CUSTOMIZE CONTENT: 1) Not a typical structure for a PID. Lacks Clarity.
2) Gantt chart is given but no detailed costing. No discussion on critical path and slack. No discussion on measure, monitor and control. No discussion on legal and contractual issues.
3) Some risks are identified in the risk management section but no risk responses or mitigation measures planned.
4) A few critical success factors were identified but in general, the section lacks clarity.
5) No discussion and comparisons on carious project approaches.

In general a management report that lack clarity. Many areas requested by the assignment are not covered at all or not covered in a manner that is clear and detailed. In addition, the format of the management report is not quite right (e.g. no introduction and no conclusion)

hi writer i have failed this paper and i have to redo this assignment. Kindly help me to covered all the detail which i have mention above. please help me covered in a manner that is clear and detailed. i will upload a files please look thorught it and mention every points thanks **