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bedroom ight (int)

Dana is packing her cloths to a bag

Sara :Dana Are you sure ? You know it’s a big disssion

Dana : yes I’m sure and this is the 5th time you ask me the same question cant you just happy for me

Sara :im your best friend and you know that from the beginning that I have a bad feeling about justin and don’t you remember what daved told you ?

Dana kept silent

You do remember that daved saw scot justin with another girl and they were hugging

Dana: yes I do remember and justin told me that’s her sister

Sara : and you really believe that a guy would take his sister to a the club and hug her on the dance floor ?

Dana : just admit it say that you are jelouse of me because I found a good looking rich guy and you couldent find some one

Whats the last you’ve been in a relation ship ?

Sara looks very suprissed and hurt

Sara left the room

Dana is still packing

 

Morning /street (Ext )

Dived with dana in his car

Dana : oh my god shes making a big deal

Daved : who cears my love tonight we should salbraite

Dana : whats the ocaion ?

Daved : we don’t need a reson to celebrite every day with you is a special day

Open the drawer

Dana open the drawer to find abox she opens it in ahurry to find an expansive
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Dana : oh daived I love you

Daved : I love you too and I cant wait for the day you ll be my wife

 

 

Fade to black
afternoon /street (Ext )

 

Dana with her friend malika (24) years old in a coffe shop are having a drink and having a chat

 

Malika is showing dana a picture of her daughter

Dana : oh my god shes so cute she grow up so fast

Malika: I know and now shes making me look older

(they are both lafughing )’

malika : oh right any news about dana ?

Dana: she not answering my calls she changed a lot she’s like anew person I cant believe that money can change a person like that !

Malika is shaking her head

 

night /living room/bedroom (INT )

Dana enter the living room and she saw candels and a bra on the floor she hurry and enter the bed room to find daved with another girl

She gets angry and start screaming

Dana : whos is that bitch ? and you said that you loved me you said that we are goning to get mearid

Daived : are you searuoesly thought im gonna meary fat bitch like you ?

Dana looked supries and cry in hestric way

Dana : you are an ass hole

Daved :get out I said get out

And he start to pull her from her hair to out of the apartment
We see dana crying fade to black

 

Dana gos back to saras apartment and she looks very confused and afried and emberieds from danas reaction
night /corridor (ext )

Dana exiet the elivetior

Close up of dana hand ringing the door bill

Close up of danas face and she looks very worried

Sara opens the door and she looks very suprissed

Dana :Im so sorry you wrer right please forgive me

Sarah looks at her surprised

Sarah kept silent and hugs dana

 
bedroom ight (int)

Dana is packing her cloths to a bag

Sara :Dana Are you sure ? You know it’s a big disssion

Dana : yes I’m sure and this is the 5th time you ask me the same question cant you just happy for me

Sara :im your best friend and you know that from the beginning that I have a bad feeling about justin and don’t you remember what daved told you ?

Dana kept silent

You do remember that daved saw scot justinwith another girl and they were hugging

Dana: yes I do remember and justintold me that’s her sister

Sara : and you really believe that a guy would take his sister to a the club and hug her on the dance floor ?

Dana : just admit it say that you are jelouse of me because I found a good looking rich guy and you couldentfind some one

Whats the last you’ve been in a relation ship ?

Sara looks very suprissed and hurt

Sara left the room

Dana is still packing

Morrning /street (Ext )

Dived with dana in his car

Dana : oh my god shes making a big deal

Daved : who cears my love tonight we should salbraite

Dana :whats the ocaion ?

Daved : we don’t need a reson to celebrite every day with you is a special day

Open the drawer

Dana open the drawer to find abox she opens it in ahurry to find an expansive
Watch

Dana : oh daived I love you

Daved : I love you too and I cant wait for the day you ll be my wife

 

 

Fade to black
afternoon /street (Ext )

 

Dana with her friend malika (24) years old in a coffe shop are having a drink and having a chat

 

Malika is showing dana a picture of her daughter

Dana : oh my god shes so cute she grow up so fast

Malika: I know and now shes making me look older

(they are both lafughing )’

malika : oh right any news about dana ?

Dana: she not answering my calls she changed a lot she’s like anew person I cant believe that money can change a person like that !

Malika is shaking her head

 

night /living room/bedroom (INT )

Dana enter the living room and she saw candels and a bra on the floor she hurry and enter the bed room to find daved with another girl

She gets angry and start screaming

Dana :whos is that bitch ? and you said that you loved me you said that we are goning to get mearid

Daived : are you searuoesly thought imgonnameary fat bitch like you ?

Dana looked supries and cry in hestric way

Dana : you are an ass hole

Daved :get out I said get out

And he start to pull her from her hair to out of the apartment
We see dana crying fade to black

 

Dana gos back to saras apartment and she looks very confused and afried and emberieds fromdanas reaction
night /corridor (ext )

Dana exiet the elivetior

Close up of dana hand ringing the door bill

Close up of danas face and she looks very worried

Sara opens the door and she looks very suprissed

Dana :Im so sorry you wrerright please forgive me

Sarah looks at her surprised

Sarah kept silent and hugs dana
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