In the discussion of borrowing (in the history / causes sections), would like to see something more like:
Language, nature of contact with Bahasa Indonesia, domains of borrowing with examples,
eg: arabic when it had contact with Bahasa Indonesia (language of religion), example more religious terms etc about arabic.thenSanskrit when? language of religion as well long time ago before Islam came to Indonesia, usually cultural terms.. example word “bahasa” in Indonesia which means “language” is adopted from sanskrit something like that,thenDutch when?as colonial languageexample and discuss more about dutch and indonesiathen English when? as global languageexample?? etc etcthen portugese when?by tradingexampleIn the discussion of impact you could either:
discuss studies of frequency of borrowing bahasa Indonesia texts(if they exist)
discuss attitudes to borrowing