Topic:  Impact of electronic commerce on the United Nation Convention on Contract for the International Sale of Goods (Chapter5)

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Chapter5 THE EFFORT OF INTERNATIONAL FORUM TO SOLVE THE IMPACT OF ELECTRONIC COMMERCE
5.1. The Role of International Chamber of Commerce
and the Interpretation/Closing gaps of CISG
by enforcing ICC eTerms 2004
5.2. The Interpretation/Closing gaps of CISG
by enforcing Draft Convention on the use of
E-Communication in International Contracts
5.3. Conclusion

I need you help to write following my professor comments;
– Chapter5 lacked of “logical flow”. it need to be explained why particular area were being discussed.
– you should analyse the effort of international forum to solve the impact of E-commerce in real details
– you could use a brief introduction as that sets the context for the reader as to why you are discussing the points you mention.
– you needed to focus on ensuring that you explain your points clearly and that you use plenty of academic comment to support your arguments
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