[a] you need to make clear whether you intend your objectives to focus on humanitarian crisis or protection in armed conflict: at the moment we take the view that the stated objectives are too ambitious.
[b] your research question or questions need to be clear on how they will contribute to meeting the research objectives.
the nature of the relationship between international human rights law and international humanitarian law
(generally, but also specifically in the context of the protection of children), as well as an initial discussion/consideration of some of the relevant conventional (and customary) rules of international law.