Here is the official prompt: ?Describe a character in fiction that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence? I am more interested in what led to choosing this character than the character himself. Here is the situation I am trying to write about: 1) When they released a new Harry Potter book, the book store held a pre-release party where kids came dressed in costumes of Harry Potter characters 2) My mother spent many hours make Harry Potter Gryffindor robes. As I was getting dressed, my father mentioned he would go as Dobby the House Elf. Dobby wears only a cut up pillow case 3) Need something on the silent exchange between my mother and father as they both realize that I will wear a pillow case now that it has been mentioned instead of the robes that my mother worked on for hours. Parents do not argue but laugh at the fathers stupidity. 4) Maybe something about the excitement of going as this character 5) Not necessary but I actually won the costume contest because I was the only one not wear a Hogwarts robe. . I need between 250 and 500 words.  Do you think you could write something like that? An example that was started is follows: I was almost eight when the new Harry Potter book; the Order of the Phoenix came out. My family and I were going to the pre-release party at the book store. I was putting on the Hogwarts robes that my mother spent I was eight when the new Harry Potter book; the Order of The Phoenix came out. My family and I were going to the prerelease party at the book store. I was putting on the Hogwarts robes that my mother spent many hours making when my father said he would like to go as Dobby the House Elf. My mother?s eyes grew narrow and mean like Bellatrix Lestrange while my eyes grew wide at the thought of going to the book store dressed as Dobby rather than Harry Potter. You see, Dobby wears only a cut up pillow case, not an elaborate robe like my mother made. My father laughed nervously and said like Hagrid ?I probably shouldn?t have said that? and then he commented on how nice the robes looked. I  am sure my father wished he had magical powers like Dobby and could disappear at that instant. My parents began looking for a pillow case knowing full well that I would be insisting on going as Dobby. Thus began my fascination with Dobby. Dobby is intensely loyal to his masters even though they treat him poorly. I work at Culver?s and even though it is not part of my long range career plan, I work hard and have a positive attitude while I am working just like Dobby. Dobby is a loyal friend. I am also a loyal friend. I think of this day often, mainly because my mother will not let my father forget about it.

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