:Does Men lose faster?
I came up with these questions:
2) Dieting
• Why do men lose weight faster than women do?
• Is it Harder for Women to Lose Weight than Men?
• Why do people gain all their weight back so often?
Below my teacher replied me back :
Elaine,
You have listed some interesting subjects and posed some good questions, but you have not listed a working thesis. Take one of your most promising questions and form a thesis.
Take a firm stand on your topic. You might want to consider writing about commercial weight loss programs. Should people follow these diets? Take a strong stand and preveiw three supporting points. Or, you can take a problem / solution approach. If you take this approach, you will have a problem / solution thesis. The first part of your paper will explore the problem. The second part of your paper will explore a couple of possible solutions.
The Teacher instructions follow below Uploaded.
Ps: I already did a research paper in English 101..But i lost my references,sources used . So ,i thought if you could work up on this research I already did, i mean you can rewriting and following the teacher suggestions.Please read very carefull because I ordered a paper and the writer even didn’t read the instructions and uploaded something completely different which my professor requested.So again. Tell me any doubts and when we are okay and I bid i will put my paper on file .