1.Purpose:Noncommissioned Officers are required to write two Essays while in ALC; one paper on a Cultural Awareness topic and one paper on Branch History and heritage in order to complete the ALC TRADOC requirements for each of these areas IAW writing and correspondence. The essay projects will enable NCO’s to develop their research and writing skills to become more effective leaders. This guidance will outline how each of these papers will be written and detailed instruction on those topics and ideas.
2.Essay Guidelines.Prepare two essay papers, 1000-1500 words in length, using the Modern Language Association (MLA) format/writing style. The essay papers will include the following in this order:
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Title Page
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Formal sentence outline (your outline must contain at least four supporting ideas with at least two subtopics for each supporting idea)
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Final draft
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Works cited page (at least four different sources.)
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Clarity index (see clarity info page)
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3. Clarity Index.
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Roman","serif"; font-size: 12.0pt;”>READABILITY
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Roman","serif"; font-size: 12.0pt;”>Passive Sentences_______________
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4. Evaluation. Your essays are evaluated on Introduction and Thesis, Body Focus, Organization, Writing and Style, and Conclusion. There are additional deductions for MLA formatting errors.
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[Excellent or Superior] rating is a letter grade (A) = 100-90 percent. [Good or Satisfactory] rating is a letter grade (B) = 89-80 percent. [Fair or Satisfactory] rating is a letter grade (C) = 79-70 percent. Needs Improvement or Unsatisfactory rating is a letter grade of (D) = 69-60 percent.
Roman","serif"; font-size: 12.0pt;”>5. Information can also be obtained from A Guide for Writing Research Papers Based on Modern Language Association to assist in writing your essays:
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http://www.ccc.commnet.edu/mla/index.shtml
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Roman","serif"; font-size: 12.0pt;”>Writing a Research Paper
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/658/01/
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Roman","serif"; font-size: 12.0pt;”>Guidelines for Research Papers
http://www.auburn.edu/~burnsma/papers.html
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6. Attached to this memorandum is a MLA Sample Paper.
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The following assignments are due on the listed dates:
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Branch History and Heritage Paper (Group project); turned into SGL on Day 8 of your course.
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Cultural Awareness Paper (Individual project); turned into SGL on the Thursday prior the STX/LFX week. These dates are final and non-negotiable, so plan accordingly. All papers are due to SGLs NLT 0800 of the relevant day. Plagiarism could result in negative counseling and removal from Honors consideration, as well as being removed from ALC. Any questions regarding plagiarism should be addressed prior to final submission of any work.
8. Branch History and Heritage Essay.
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The goal for this essay is to assist in the goal of Instruction of Military History (IMH) IAW TRADOC Regulation 350-13 in order to focus students on branch history and heritage of their branch. The context for the essay illustrates the applications of military history to training and leadership and a sense of branch significance.
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Objectives.
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Provide Soldiers with a program of basic military heritage and history instruction that is sequential and progressive, including tools which may be used for continued professional development.
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Stimulate an interest in continuous study of military and branch history beyond the classroom through individual reading programs, to assist future leaders in forming mature judgments about the profession of arms.
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To know and understand the evolution and historical contribution of the NCO in the U.S. Army; the role of the NCO during the evolution of combined arms warfare; and the uses of history in military leadership.
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Guidelines for a Branch History & Heritage Essay Paper. The following serves as a guide in which to research, outline, draft and type your final paper.
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Write anessay on a topic concerning a battle, event, or unit within your branch discussing the history and/or heritage of that topic and how it relates to the evolution and contribution towards today’s military operations and bring a historical perspective to contemporary military problems and leadership.
9. Cultural Awareness Guidelines and Topics.
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The goal for this essay is to meet TRADOC and the Fires Center of Excellence Commanding General’s intent of implementing Cultural Awareness training into NCOES using the following goals as set by TRADOC:
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Cultural Expertise – Culture professionals and leaders who possess an advanced level of cross-cultural competence pertaining to a specific geographic area. These Soldierswill be able to evaluate and synthesize terms, factors, concepts, and regional information into plans, programs, and advice to commanders.
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Cultural Understanding – Soldiers and Leaders, who will be able to apply relevant terms, factors, concepts and regional information to their tasks and missions, as well as analyze situational requirements.
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Cultural Awaren