Use big data to help companies to effectively enhance the work of the staff.

want to choose the companies in China. this is my final proposal.
The work that you carry out for your final proposal may include the following (obviously the precise nature of the dissertation topic will determine the extent of the coverage of certain areas that are listed below, and you should discuss this with your supervisor):
? Fleshing out a more detailed outline of the structure of the dissertation, which might
also include a provisional list of chapter headings.
? Carrying out a literature review of key references pertinent to the subject of the
dissertation. This should be a review of the literature to get the project underway and should aim to include key texts at this stage. The literature review should continue to be updated as the project progresses and then finalised just before the final submission of the dissertation.
? Reviewing the theoretical framework within which the problem will be explored and identifying the methodological approach, e.g. Dervin’s sense-making theory of information seeking behaviour, Checkland’s soft systems methodology, the basic Cranfield/TREC paradigm for information retrieval system testing, etc.
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? Planning the actual methods to be used, including any questionnaires, interviews, and other data collection and analysis procedures.
? Consideration of any ethical issues relevant to your planned research (including informed consent, anonymity, confidentiality, etc.), detailing how you are addressing these.
? Establishing external contacts/collaboration, and planning/making initial visits.
? Production of a timetable of planned work.
? Exploring potential problems which might occur during the dissertation period.

here is structure of this proposal
? Introduction and context
? Research aims and objectives
? Literature review
? Methodology
? Practicalities
? Ethical aspects
? References

order this proposal from your website, but it was failed. I will upload my professor feedback as well. could you please avoid these problem this time ?
please read all my files carefully , and the references should cited in APA style.