The agricultural revelation was first upheaval to transform European society from a feudal to capitalist social system, during the early eighteenth century. (RC)
Re-write your second paragraph. Begin with the sentence above (labeled RC). After you have re-written your paragraph, write another paragraph explaining why you made the changes you did.
The agricultural revolution led to the emergence of agrarian societies where the primary source of wealth is agricultural production. The agricultural revolution began in Europe and led to the emergence of the elite who gained control over numerous resources. This centralization of power led to the formation of the state and the development of institutions to protect the resources of the elites. In Britain, for instance laws under the Enclosure Act were passed. This allowed the wealthy to buy public land pushing out small scale farmers. These small-scale farmers would then resort to work on the farms of the wealthy. The small-scale farmers that were not able to find work on the farms of the wealthy then became vagrants within the cities of Britain.