Using feedback from your professor and classmates, revise Parts 1 and 2, and add Part 3. Plan to include visuals to illustrate the advantages of your proposed solution.

Write an eight to ten (8-10) page paper in which you:

Provide Part I: Revision of A Problem Exists (3-4 pages)

1. Revise your Persuasive Paper Part 1: A Problem Exists, using feedback from the professor and classmates.

Provide Part 2: Revision of Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages (3-4 pages)

2. Revise your Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages, using feedback from the professor and classmates.

Develop Part 3: Possible Disadvantages, Answers, with Visuals (1-2 pages, for 7-9 total pages)

1. Included a defensible, relevant thesis statement in the first paragraph.

2. State, explain, and support the first disadvantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution and provide a logical answer. This should

be one (1) paragraph.

3. State, explain, and support the second (and third if desired) disadvantage (economic, social, political, environmental, social, equitable, ethical/moral, etc.) to your solution and provide a

logical answer. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.

4. Include one or two (1-2) relevant visuals that help illustrate an advantage.

5. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences.

6. Provide a concluding paragraph to summarize the proposed solution, its advantages, possible disadvantages, and answers to the disadvantages. Repeat or paraphrase your thesis

statement.

7. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

8. Use one (1) or more rhetorical strategy (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain claims.

9. Support disadvantages and answers with at least two (2) additional quality relevant references. Use at least eight (8) total for Parts 1, 2, and 3. Note: Wikipedia and other Websites do not

qualify as academic resources.

Your assignment must follow these formatting guidelines:

Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; citations and references must follow APA or school-specific format. Check with your

professor for any additional instructions.
Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and the reference page are not included in

the required assignment page length.
Note: Submit your assignment to the designated plagiarism program so that you can make revisions before submitting your paper to your professor.

The specific course learning outcomes associated with this assignment are:

Recognize the elements and correct use of a thesis statement.
Associate the features of audience, purpose, and text with various genres.
Analyze the rhetorical strategies of ethos, pathos, logos in writing samples and for incorporation into essays or presentations.
Correct grammatical and stylistic errors consistent with Standard Written English. Prepare a research project that supports an argument with structure and format appropriate to the genre.
Revise drafts to improve clarity, support, and organization.
Recognize how to organize ideas with transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
Incorporate relevant, properly documented sources to substantiate ideas.
Use technology and information resources to research

Part I
Introduction: Should changes be made to regulations for mental health drugs for minors?

Thesis (at end of the introduction):I believe that mental health drug regulations should be changed€¦..This needs to be added as the last sentence in your introduction. It is the thesis which you

are missing. You have to demand that changes be made: specific changes.

History of issue:
First issue:One problem that occurs because of the current use of mental health drugs is€¦€¦
Support from a primary or secondary source:none given
Second issueThe second problem that occurs because of the current use of mental health drugs is€¦€¦
Support from a primary or secondary source:none given
Third issueAnother issue that occurs because of the current use of mental health drugs is€¦€¦
Support from a primary or secondary source:none given
Conclusion: promise a solution
Part II
Introduction and give a specific solution: GIVE A SPECIFIC SOLUTION. Give a specific law that you want enactedMy solution to this problem of mental health drugs being used

is€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦€¦?????? (you need ONE solution)
First advantage of your ONE proposed solution:none given
Support from a primary or secondary source:none given
Second advantageof your ONE proposed solution: none given
Support from a primary or secondary source:none given ADD this to final revision in week 10
Third advantageof your ONE proposed solution: none given
Support from a primary or secondary source:none given ADD this to final revision in week 10
Conclusion
Part III
Introduction which gives us the solution again and ends with a thesis that states the solution can have disadvantages
First disadvantage:(what is a disadvantage to the solution you want enacted?)
A visual for this disadvantage: this will need a reference entry on the reference page
A logical response about this disadvantage that lets audience know they should not be deterred from enacting the solution.
Second disadvantage:(what is a disadvantage to the solution you want enacted?)
A visual for this disadvantage:this will need a reference entry on the reference page
A logical response about this disadvantage that lets audience know they should not be deterred from enacting the solution.
Provide a concluding paragraph to summarize the proposed solution, its advantages, possible disadvantages, and answers to the disadvantages.  Repeat or paraphrase your thesis statement.