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Provide computer system administration, local area network administration, and system and network security to the US Navy.

?    Design, implement, support vCenter 5.x, Active Directory, Exchange 2007 / 2010, SCCM 2012, Windows
Server 2003/2008R2, CommVault, and Backup Exec.
?    Responsible for Windows Server 2003, 2008, 2008R2 operation and maintenance.
?    Administered Active Directory, DNS, WINS, & DHCP in a Windows 2003/2008 domain.
?    Administered and maintained Exchange Server 2007 environment.
?    Day-to-day administration and monitoring of VMware, EqualLogic, and Quantum
?    Execute system backups using Commvault, at specified intervals to prevent data loss and preserve database integrity.
?    Diagnose equipment malfunctions and operating problems, troubleshoot network problems, including connectivity, hardware, and software issues, and take corrective action.
?    Support SCCM for operating system deployment, software installation, and patching.
?    Responsible for identifying, mitigating and reporting vulnerabilities on all servers by identifying missing IAVAs and implementing STIGs
?    Provide computer system administration, local area network administration, and system and network security to the US Navy.

Key Accomplishments
?    Worked with IA to eliminate all Class 1 STIG hits from all 2008 servers. Team received highest score
(85) from CSI-CP inspection ever.
?    Coordinated with Navy personnel to recover storage tapes from offsite location to perform recovery of lost email/data.
?    Coordinated with site System Administrators in Rota, Sigonella, and Souda Bay to troubleshoot respective site issues and maintain disaster recovery readiness.
?    Built 2 SCCM 2012 Servers for use in ONE-Net. The setup configuration was used as the standard in both the Middle East and Far East.
?    Coordinates with NASM Networks, DCO, and TIER 4 to resolve Remedy incidents.
?    Utilized PowerShell scripts to allow for better accounts maintenance with ONE-NET Europe.
?    Commended for excellent work in security patching.