Please edit my essay according to the teachers rubrics, all the five requirements that she give scores needs to be improve to get a score 9. Also, edit all the things she has suggested, change the way how i tell the story as she suggested.The 4th page is teachers rubric. btw, Please add a lot of details, such as how her mood changes, clothings color. You basically writing about how Gabis life would change if she made different decisions. or if something has happened in her life,how her life would change. The story tree pic is uploaded here as well. PLEASE ADD CONTENT AND Write to 4 pages! Thanks