Topic: Editing my essay’s mistakes

Order Description
submitted my essay but I got on it -F so which I need from you fix these mistakes. I made PDF has my professor’s marks of my mistakes I will upload it to you to understand what I need to fix also add some paragraph.. also, I need on my essay conclusion please make a conclusion, and add more sources. You will need to make it APA style, Also I need you change the topic and choose a strong topic. Please make it professional it is worth a lot of grades.

WARNING:
Please, DO NOT COPY OR PLAGIARIZING ANYTHING FROM anywhere. If there any COPY OR PLAGIARIZED
(even one sentence ). I will get ZERO in the class and I will be kicked out of school and no school will accept me at all. The paper will run under 4 different plagiarism checkers. So, there is NO WAY the professor can not find out IF ANY sentence was PLAGIARIZED.