Ancient Greece
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Discusses the main argument/idea about the relationship between selected works and the chosen theme, but discussion is cursory or illogical

Feedback:

condense this into just one paragraph that focuses entirely on the Amphora and the Iliad. Include something about the contemporary connections as well–how these
connect with our time. In the next Milestones, you will be asked to include more about the connection to modern times, so add a little bit in the intro as well.
Submission has major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that negatively impact readability and articulation of main ideas

Feedback:
The writing looked really nice, and there weren’t too many mistakes there. The big thing I want you to make sure you do is have the references in either MLA or APA
citations–which ever you are more comfortable with. Here are some resources that might help with that: — https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ —
https://www.easybib.com/ One big reason I wanted to see those was just to be able to check on your resources and to make sure they were good quality.

Use this feedback in order to create a good final paper because that is what this is my final paper I will upload some work to help better but use this because there
was a few things which needed to be change from the rough draft and that is what this feedback was for.

Álvarez Lopera, J. (2005). “El Greco: From Crete to Toledo (translated in Greek by Sofia Giannetsou)”. in M. Tazartes’ “El Greco”. Explorer. ISBN 960-7945-83-2
Boardman, John ed., (1993). The Oxford History of Classical Art. OUP, ISBN 0-19-814386-9
Fox, R.L. (2008). Travelling Heroes: Greeks and their myths in the epic age of Homer. Allen Lane. ISBN 978-0-7139-9980-8.
Harris, E. (1938). “A Decorative Scheme by El Greco”. Burlington Magazine for Connoisseurs (The Burlington Magazine Publications, Ltd.) 72 (421): 154–155+157–159+162–
164. JSTOR 867279